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November 15, 2012
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Cervidae - order of deer in latin(thankyou google).
I wanted it to say deer earth, or deer land, but it sounded funny once translated.

regardless, here we have another fantastic quality iphone photo *ahem*

ball point pen, watercolour, and coloured pencil.

design is my own.
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:iconlalagabrysia:
This concept is phenomenal. It's whimsical, and the message it sends to me is that animals are more "one with nature" than humans are. I also like how the one antler is parallel to the picture plane and the other is perpendicular.. a wise use of space. You were also very successful in rendering the form of the deer with simple contour lines and subtle value shifts. Bravo!

Suggestions for improvement:
If you're going to make another one of these, or something similar, I would suggest making it a larger size so that you can get the details in there. I would love to be able to see everything you included there, like sharp lines for the stairs, etc.
I would also suggest that you do something with the background, even just a little abstract wash of flat color. It would give you more control over the whole piece. For this piece, I would suggest a light blue, like a sky.

Overall, lovely work. I could even see it as a tattoo design!

(PS- If you like my style of critique, you should join my new group #Critiquely and submit your stuff!)
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=TheWritingDragon May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is sooooooo cute and so creative! :la: where did you come up with such a neat idea? I love the deer's eyes and the way his fur flows to each side and I think the trees on his antlers are so cute! :D
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:iconmadeleinestern:
just off the top of my head lovely:) thankyou!
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*bloodawni Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gorgeous. Love the concept, too!
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:iconmadeleinestern:
thanks very much:)
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*bloodawni Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome! :)
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:iconmadeleinestern:
thanks very much:)
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~MrWootton Jan 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Great concept!
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:iconmadeleinestern:
thanks very much:)
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=Spellprints Dec 20, 2012  Professional Filmographer
what a wonderful concept and realization!
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